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Requiem

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A dance, a trance, an intricate weave,
A turn, we learn, what it is to decieve,
A friend, a foe, a broken beginning,
A scream, a dream, a flight neverending,
All for the hope of light everlasting,
We journey into a world of requiem.
I did this for a desc but I like it sooo... submitting it as a poem... 'cause I like it. x.x Not sure where it goes as they took the little clicky descriptions off the submit thing... x.x
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reaumursboilingpoint's avatar
(Very late comment) This is a bit vague to the point of seeming illogical, but it sounds good and the style is nice.
Some of the rhythm seemed off, but since it's open, that shouldn't matter, and ti didn't interrupt the flow too much. Requiem is a poetic concept, and you've shown it well. :D